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Sunday, May 02, 2010

Writing headlines down under.

That is, writing headlines down under the story where they're not as likely to be read. So, I'm fixing it.

Penultimate (second to last) paragraph:
Police are searching for the vandals and want to speak to up to a dozen teenage males, described as being of Mediterranean/Middle Eastern appearance, seen in the area before the incident.
First paragraphs:

Anzac Day celebrations in NSW have been marred by vandals attacking a suburban Sydney war memorial.

Up to a dozen teenagers are believed to have been involved, throwing rubbish around the Anzac Cenotaph outside the Arncliffe RSL Club, in Sydney's south, and snapping a flagpole some time between 7.30pm and 7.45pm last night.

http://www.smh.com.au/national/anzac-celebrations-marred-by-vandalism-20100425-tl8s.html

Or: Police are searching for a dozen Muslims today in Sydney, NSW after they trashed a war memorial last evening.

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